Vampires, and Dryads, and Demons oh my! (first page of the story)

Good day folks posting up the first page of the story I am gonna write about my dream. Normally I will not post so little but right now I want opinios of writing style so comment...please ^_^.

Lavish dresses exploded outward in bursts of brightly colored fabric, as nobles spun and twirled across the dance floor. Men in tight form fitting brightly colored suits shifted quickly around the spinning vibrant women of the dance floor, their faces hidden by multicolored featureless duck billed masks. Prince Lucien Heart, and an entourage of beautiful women danced amidst the chaos soaking in the bright light, and drowning in the waves of fast paced orchestra.

“Sir, wine from the cardinal himself to celebrate this most joyous of birthdays.