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aloneataparty's picture

This place doesn't let you see stars
Moves you to another direction
where there's heat but not light.
You can go to whatever it is that appears to be glowing
but its only good if you can forget warmth.

Again assuming I know a lot

Let's look and see what's around us.
There's nothing growing,
well not as I know of.
Its not dead though, i can tell.

There's something moving up the icy mountains
Do you want to check it out?
Its like hundreds of ants from here
Lets go

Penguins
Oh thats what they were
and i thought the world ended and I was blasted to another place and once again lost in a cloud.
Again I assume I was the only one saved
Sorry, i mean you included.

So how do you want to end this?
Let's decide before we lose ourselves.
I cant move not knowing how its all supposed to end.

Sit down think with me

From up here, its all icy, with the faint new sun and slow moving animals in tuxedos.

I'm tired, are you?
Lets decide later
Just don't decide to go when I'm asleep.

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spookyyank's picture

I like it!

Good, good, good! Is it a song??? If not, it'd make a great song! Keep it up, Alone ~ tis wonderful and weird and - what a voice!

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aloneataparty's picture

LOL spooky no its not a song

OMG are you being sarcastic? Sorry ive lost my sarcasm tracking device, its been a long time since I've used the gun that goes with it too. lol.... I actually made a new set of starting lines for that...

This doesn't let you see stars
yet it moves you to another space
where there's heat but not light.
You can try & catch what seems to glow
but you should forget warmth.

i think this one makes it less icky in a way, it came from seeing those penguin films..happy feet and surfs up then added a few things more, its not a poem, i dont know what it is. lol.

spookyyank's picture

I like it, no matter what it is!

Sorry to be late! I really do like it - it rings of - well, I can't put my finger on it. So many ideas rolling around together in a way that makes on odd kind of sense! Wow, now THAT really doesn't make sense! LOL

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aloneataparty's picture

LOL spooky no its not a song

OMG are you being sarcastic? Sorry ive lost my sarcasm tracking device, its been a long time since I've used the gun that goes with it too. lol.... I actually made a new set of starting lines for that...

This doesn't let you see stars
yet it moves you to another space
where there's heat but not light.
You can try & catch what seems to glow
but you should forget warmth.

i think this one makes it less icky in a way, it came from seeing those penguin films..happy feet and surfs up then added a few things more, its not a poem, i dont know what it is. lol.

spookyyank's picture

I like the line

where there's heat but no light. It makes me think of places filled with fake human warmth. Those hollow people how only pretend to love something! I think that's what I like about the poem. It allows the reader to make it what they see.

STALKING EDGAR ON MYSPACE

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